Topic Trip

We have been learning about writing newspaper articles. Craig and I have written this article about our trip to the Science Centre and Tall Ship.

TOPIC TRIP

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  1. Well done boys! This was a good article.
    * You have included all the key points in order of importance.
    * You have included some relevant quotes which show both a child and adult’s view of the day.
    /* You had quite a bit of help editing your work. Next time I would like to see you read over everything carefully to check for missing punctuation, capital letters and spelling errors. Remember the names of people and places (proper nouns) all need capital letters.

    Miss Robertson

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