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  1. A very good article- well done!
    * I like the way you have used alliteration in your headline.
    * You have included all the relevant key points.
    /* Next time make sure the most important points are included first – the weather was not really the focus for your article and therefore this could have gone into background information.

    Miss Robertson

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